What do you think of my art? How do I improve it?
Hi Guys,
So I'm trying to make a candy like in cut the rope, Unfortunately as some of you may know, I'm crap at art!
So this is what I came up with:
I was trying to make candy like this, What on earth do I do to fix it
Cheers,
Jack
So I'm trying to make a candy like in cut the rope, Unfortunately as some of you may know, I'm crap at art!

So this is what I came up with:

I was trying to make candy like this, What on earth do I do to fix it


Cheers,
Jack
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Braydon_SFX Posts: 9,273
Hey Jack,
I think what your going to want to do is get rid of some of the red and white stripes.
It looks to distracting as it is.
Add gradients to each red and white stripe. This will be much better then a solid color.
Notice the shadows, they are just darker tones of the original colors, do the Same, give it some glossy overlay and see how it works.My GameSalad Academy Courses! ◦ Check out my quality templates! ◦ Add me on Skype: braydon_sfx
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your art is not bad,but I think they should be more colorful and a bigger stroke
i hope it helps...
WTDeveloper
PS:My game wasn't based on DBA's template it was based on an video tutorial by DBA :P
Oh right excuse me, lol It just looks like DBA's template
Thats for the tips.. I've tried a bigger stroke but its even worse
Try to get rid of the thin lines and try to add bigger strokes
that are my tips
WTDeveloper
Ich trage (I tried?) aber ist nicht so gut mit großen Hüben ....
can i send it to you per email and you can post it??
i made it with inkscape but i'm not very good at art
Thanks mate!, Ill try that now!, I can always trust you for good artwork!
@wtDeveloper
Thats Brilliant!, Almost exactly like it!, How on earth did you do that in inkscape?
Braydon(at)coyer.net
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and practice and practice
or i get this from my parents
i don't know
PS:i made that in five minutes, i think when i would take more time i could do it almost exactly...
maybe we should go together when we are older and make a new company
but maybe i can help you with art in your next projects!!!